Sunday, August 15, 2010

Pop Goes My Heart

I know you love cola so much. And you know you shouldn't be drinking them because it's really bad for you. I was just so happy the other night, I drew this for you and gave it to you. Here's one cola that isn't bad for you. I'm glad you liked it.




But towards the end of the night, things turned sour. You can be really mean when you are upset. You chose to say things I believe you don't really mean, and withheld those that really mattered. I was crushed. I was confused then, but now I see more clearly.

I was worried that what we had was very much like cola; bound to lose its spirit. The can was popped open but we had to wait long before we can take a sip. As we wait the cola gives off it's spirit into the humid air but our mouths were left parched.



11 comments:

MakMak said...

Hangkyut nung drawing. :)

Nakaka-guilty tuloy na natuwa ako kahit medyo pensive yung entry. :/

odin hood said...

hehe it's okay really :)

citybuoy said...

the drawings make it seem deceivingly happy. they're so cute, i almost want to hug them.

when coke loses its spirit, is it possible to get it back again?

Anonymous said...

parang milktoof? milkytoof? yung kinaadikan ni toiletots? hangkyut. :D

odin hood said...

@citybuoy, i dunno, iniinom ko pa rin naman kahit wala na spirit eh, wag lang panis hehe

@jepoy, pano naman naging parang milktoof to?! ang layo kaya hehe

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Fickle Cattle said...

This story was sad, but the drawings were awesome.

http://ficklecattle.blogspot.com/

Nimmy said...

ayyy. may ganung twist. :(

Victor Saudad said...

i prefer coke with less fizz. mas maiinom ko. :P

Victor Saudad said...

i prefer coke with less fizz. mas maiinom ko. :P

odin hood said...

less fizz is okay, pero wag naman ung sobrang wala na, ung sobrang tagal na pangit na ng lasa. ew kaya hehe